I also lul'd at the cutesy animations. They were a nice touch.
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| Author: | raptorus [ Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:59 pm ] |
| Post subject: | new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
TFW have a lack of players? lets help i do some "aggresive marketing" on other similar(tcg-player) games lobby until i was banned (2 accounts) poxnora players said:"this is a crap game, there is nobody online" hmm, true. and at last i got ready my trailer http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSTCNgoFBQ4 enjoy, post, rate, comment thx |
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| Author: | DarkJello [ Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
raptorus: The youtube video is the best I have ever seen r/t tfw! Congrats man! I am sure it will help get the word out some. One recommendation: many of the words during the video need to be in a brighter color and stay on the screen a little bit longer. Looks great. Ciao, DarkJello |
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| Author: | headshot [ Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
Good job! However, Epic Veteran swinging his axe was slightly amusing to me in a way perhaps not intended. |
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| Author: | Sunyaku [ Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
I also lul'd at the cutesy animations. They were a nice touch.
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| Author: | raptorus [ Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
thx thx it is very important to hear comments for my work so i can improve it.(until i asked always my sister(she is artist)) the text is too quick and bad to read? ok thx the swing of the epic veteran was my first flash animation in my life so, yes it is the worstes one. is the fire of the elemental ok???? |
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| Author: | Theohe [ Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
you misspelled flash as Falsh |
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| Author: | Keyser [ Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
I like the idea and implementation. Couple comments: *make it shorter -- the average attention span of the youtube browsing individual is extremely short. *make the text easier to read (bigger, last longer) Other than that: AWESOME. |
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| Author: | Keyser [ Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
p.s. perhaps having someone speak the words would be better than the text... If you need someone to do an audio voice over, let me know. I'll be glad to. |
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| Author: | DarkJello [ Wed Oct 14, 2009 10:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
raptorus: How cool would it be if a true acolyte of jello mastery was the "voice" of the trailer? People respect, fear, and crave jello on a subconsciouis level that is as yet unexplained by science!  Seriously, it is looking great!Make the words easier to read, last a tad longer, and possibly use a more gelatinous font. Keyser might be right r/t the length of the entire trailer. Final point, hire DarkJello. I still don't get what is so funny about the Epic Veteran swinging an axe. BTW, could you work in a graphic of the Bloodlings? That would probably bring in some players...  DarkJello |
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| Author: | raptorus [ Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:24 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube |
strategie is spelt wrong....... i recognice that the words are a little bit to fast. hmm next time i will do it better, because to change it is a huge project (believe me, i work non "non-destructive") yes, "clanchef" darkjello if you send me your voices in mp3,wma i can easy add it. i dont have a mic keyser give you a try to if you want (and i still cant get wtf is this for a hippo....) raptorus@gmx.de and the bloodlings. i know we love tits. but the bloodlings are manga and are the ugliest bitches i ever seen so..... no bloodlings. Quote: *make it shorter -- the average attention i know what you mean. i know exactly what i do. |
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