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raptorus
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Post subject: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube  Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:59 pm |
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TFW have a lack of players? lets help i do some "aggresive marketing" on other similar(tcg-player) games lobby until i was banned (2 accounts) poxnora players said:"this is a crap game, there is nobody online" hmm, true. and at last i got ready my trailer http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSTCNgoFBQ4enjoy, post, rate, comment thx
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DarkJello
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:01 pm |
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raptorus:
The youtube video is the best I have ever seen r/t tfw! Congrats man! I am sure it will help get the word out some. One recommendation: many of the words during the video need to be in a brighter color and stay on the screen a little bit longer. Looks great.
Ciao,
DarkJello
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:31 pm |
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Good job! However, Epic Veteran swinging his axe was slightly amusing to me in a way perhaps not intended.
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:04 am |
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I also lul'd at the cutesy animations. They were a nice touch. 
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raptorus
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:09 pm |
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thx thx
it is very important to hear comments for my work so i can improve it.(until i asked always my sister(she is artist))
the text is too quick and bad to read? ok thx
the swing of the epic veteran was my first flash animation in my life so, yes it is the worstes one.
is the fire of the elemental ok????
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:30 pm |
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you misspelled flash as Falsh
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:42 pm |
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I like the idea and implementation.
Couple comments:
*make it shorter -- the average attention span of the youtube browsing individual is extremely short.
*make the text easier to read (bigger, last longer)
Other than that: AWESOME.
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Keyser
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:43 pm |
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p.s. perhaps having someone speak the words would be better than the text...
If you need someone to do an audio voice over, let me know. I'll be glad to.
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 10:10 pm |
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raptorus: How cool would it be if a true acolyte of jello mastery was the "voice" of the trailer? People respect, fear, and crave jello on a subconsciouis level that is as yet unexplained by science!  Seriously, it is looking great! Make the words easier to read, last a tad longer, and possibly use a more gelatinous font. Keyser might be right r/t the length of the entire trailer. Final point, hire DarkJello. I still don't get what is so funny about the Epic Veteran swinging an axe. BTW, could you work in a graphic of the Bloodlings? That would probably bring in some players...  DarkJello
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Post subject: Re: new(first) TFW trailer on youtube Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:24 am |
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strategie is spelt wrong....... i recognice that the words are a little bit to fast. hmm next time i will do it better, because to change it is a huge project (believe me, i work non "non-destructive") yes, "clanchef" darkjello if you send me your voices in mp3,wma i can easy add it. i dont have a mic keyser give you a try to if you want (and i still cant get wtf is this for a hippo....) raptorus@gmx.deand the bloodlings. i know we love tits. but the bloodlings are manga and are the ugliest bitches i ever seen so..... no bloodlings. Quote: *make it shorter -- the average attention i know what you mean. i know exactly what i do.
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